The face structure, shading, line work and coloring are done great! It's hard to get past the questionable suggestiveness of the pose on the left though. Seems unnecessary and weird. Also the anatomy and foreshortening on the right is a bit inaccurate. Overall an impressive piece in certain stylistic choices, but the concept and figure drawing is under developed. Please continue to post great art; this shows great potential.
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